Delighted, she hurried to prepare a tea party for her handsome 'prince,' for she did not know he was coming today! She carefully set out the plastic china that she had received for her seventh birthday, and pulled out a way-too-small chair for her father to sit on. And so the tea party was in session!
The daughter wanted to make sure that her father had the warmest reception, so she offered up her finest Earl Gray, gave him the choicest of biscuits, and gave him her favorite lace handkerchief. He seemed pleased with the honor she showed him.
Earl Grey tea in raw form.
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Conversation flowed, pleasantries exchanged, and the father asked his daughter if she had any books he could read her. She happily ran to her white bookshelf and picked up her favorite picture book, proudly holding it out to her father.
Little did she know that in the time it took her to pick out the book, something had shifted in her father, as it always did. He was no longer smiling.
"Not that book."
Terror entered as the tone shifted in her father's voice; she walked back to the bookshelf and picked up a different book, desperately hoping that he would snap out of it.
"You've got to be kidding me. No one wants to read that book to you. You have the worst taste in books."
She hated when he lost patience. She never knew when she would get her 'prince charming' or her 'worst nightmare' father. She tried once more to hand him a book they had read together a thousand times.
"Whatever, I'm done with you. You aren't worth my time."
Inwardly pleading for the prince charming part of her father to come back she fought back tears, praying that if nothing else he would at least leave before it escalated.
“Wwhat do you want fwom me, Daddy?” the daughter trembled.
“Oh now you ask what I want? I want you to shut up and stop bothering me.” the father boomed.
He took one more glance around and stormed out of the room, slamming the door behind him. The daughter gasped a sigh of relief and desperation. She didn’t know what it was that he wanted, or how she was to please him; all she knew was that she was terrified and that she shouldn’t play around with her father.
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Hey Avery! You have a great writing style. I started out this story really enjoying it and did;t see the sad ending coming! I feel so bad for the little girl! You did a great job developing this story and recreating it from the original content. I hope this dad gets better and becomes his loll girl's prince charming again soon!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story! I think the changes you made in making it a father daughter dynamic were really interesting and it brought a very different feel to the story. I think you did a really good job of staying true to the inspiration of the original story but still making it your own. Your story flowed really smoothly all throughout and you did a really great job overall.
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